Thursday, April 07, 2005

Fool


Fool©2005 Jesús Antonio Hernandez Rodriguez
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My western story called Fool.
Plot:How love is not even ruled to what We expect or want.
Main Characters Ursula B. and William Chap
Script written and drawn by me.
Page one of two
Panel 05 of 10

Flashback
Panel five Close up of Ursula looking at William and holding a Tarot card, She is naked near a river at night.She looks a bit worried.

Voice off panel:William speaking.

Caption01: I told you to stop using those silly cards but you insisted. I want to hold you tight.
Caption02: In a sudden you changed your expression, I just told you what was wrong and you told me "nothing...", I even asked you about that card, but no word came from your mouth.
Caption03:I didn`t insist but I saw a Tower in that drawing, You told me that it was nothing that you would show me two more cards. Those silly cards of yours...


Have a great day!!..JESUS ANTONIO

3 comments:

johnnyjustice said...

Antonio,

Western comics rule! I can't wait to see how this progresses!

I think that western comics are becoming a lot more popular because we men are tired of seeing the "sensitive male" - we want down and dirty guns blazin' action!

Keep it up, it looks great!

Jason
http://jasonossman.com

Ubod_ng_Lumpia said...

it looks like your story Fool is making progress :) keep it up jesus... been busy all week long never had time to draw :) hehehehe but ill draw now i dont have classes till monday :) --kino--

antonio said...

Jason!!Good to hear from you..I received your mail give me some days to continue writing to you...hahah you are right about the western comics!!
Thanks for the words!!..JESUS ANTONIO

Kino!!! long time no hear from you!! thanks for the words..I am still working very hard in the writing it seems that I can not control as I wish the voices aspect (Nik my friend has the enormous talent of writing characters with different voices and imputs..I really want one day to write like him in reference to the way of speaking in the characters) I am trying hard..Enjoy your days off Kino!!..JESUS ANTONIO